Dr. Eli’s Daughter Lana (11 Years Old) Publishes Her First Poem

Lana Lizorkin's first poemThis is one of my daughter’s first poems. I love it, I think you may like it too. (In Hebrew this piece is written out in acrostic that spells my daughter first and last name!).

 

 

 

 

 

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I love to laugh
I also like to dance
My favorite season is spring

I like to blossom together with it
I know how to enjoy this blossoming too
This is my great joy

I am like a flower dancing in the wind
I am dancing and dreaming
Lite like a bird, knowing how to make friends happy
Nice and ready to always help.

ליצחוק אני אוהבת
נחמד לי גם לירקוד
העונה האהובה עלי היא אביב

לפרוח ביחד איתה נעים לי
יודעת אני ליהנות מהפריחה
זאת שמחה גדולה בשבילי
ואני כמו פרח רוקד ברוח
רוקדת וחולמת

קלה כמו ציפור
יודעת לשמח חברים
נאמנה ועוזרת תמיד

Me encanta reír
También me gusta bailar
Mi estación preferida es la primavera

Me gusta florecer junto a ella
Sé cómo disfrutar también de este florecimiento
Es mi gran alegría

Soy como una flor bailando en el viento
Estoy bailando y soñando
Liviana como un pájaro, sabiendo cómo hacer feliz a los amigos
Agradable y dispuesta a ayudar siempre.

© Lana Lizorkin (2013). All rights reserved.

 

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  1. Chieko

    Beautiful poem, reflections of a lovely person and kind heart

  2. Alyson

    Lovely poem! Thank you for sharing!

  3. Michal

    Shalom Dr. Eli,
    I read your daughter’s lovely poem to my mom, and it reminded us of when I first began my journey in writing poetry in my journals.
    Thank you for sharing her beautiful writing. She writes so freely from her heart that you can almost see her dancing like a bird on the wind, bringing joy to her family and friends. She must bring you and your wife such great blessing day by day. I trust she will have the deep, deep joy of dancing with Yeshua, there is nothing to compare with our Beloved’s embrace and the joy that ensues.
    You’re all in my prayers as הרוח הקדש brings you before me. May He keep you under the Almighty’s protecting shadow (Psalm 91).
    שלום בישוע המשיח,
    Michal מיכל

  4. natasha cher

    Very happy child and very talented!!!

  5. Ramonana

    Just like David, the son of Jesse, we are going to learn a lot from her. She has come to this world 4 a purpose, 2 b a light 2 some of us who are still in darkness. May God protect nd bless her abundantly 2gether with her parents.

  6. Evandro Oliveira

    Lightness, innocense and talent. Perfect fit!
    Congrats.

  7. Gale S. Davis

    The poem is wonderful!! Your daughter is very blessed.

  8. mário césar

    How nice, congrats,

  9. Zoltan

    Lana!
    Parabéns por suas palavras.

  10. Paulo Mendes Glória

    Congratulations Lana and Dr. Eli!
    I hope we can read many poems.

  11. David Rivers

    Beautiful! Tov me’od, Lana! Yasher koach!

  12. peter kapanga

    Dear Lana, You are blessed gift from God to your parents and the entire universe.
    Best wishes & God bless you

  13. gustavo vargas angel

    Again, Lana, may the Lord bless you with the honey from heaven on your lips and your soul. Best for you.

  14. June R Massoud

    Hello Dr. Eli,
    This is such a nice and beautiful poem written by your daughter.
    it’s very lovely. Thank you for sharing it. It’s very artistic in nature.
    Best Wishes and God Bless Your Daughter –June Rosemarie Massoud

  15. Ramonana

    She is really a poet. May God bless her indeed.

  16. Bea Blignault

    Dear Lana. What an awesome poem. It is summer her in South Africa and through your poem i can see spring again. Dancing in the rain is a lot of fun and cleansing. Keep on praising the Father through your words and thanks for the blessing. Bea

  17. Jemima

    Nice & Beautiful. Wishes for more new poems.

  18. elijahworkz

    beautiful! It’s very light and joyous! Wish I knew ivrit better so I can enjoy it in the original.

  19. gustavo vargas angel

    Dear Dr.: Your little daughter remindme a bee or a hummingbird, both of them dancing on air, very happy with the job they are doing, just like the childrens of the spirit, as our Lord said. Best for each of yours.

  20. Fred Aguelo

    Indeed, you are like a flower, Lana, blossoming; but one will neber appreciate your beauty unless he stops to observe you. Never lose your childlike innocence. Keep it up!

  21. Drs. Charles van den Berg

    Lana, this is really hearth whole nice. It makes me dancing and dreaming.

  22. Al Mawhinney

    Lana, Always dance. Always love. Always live. Always laugh. May God give you blossoms that you have not yet dreamed of.

  23. Connie Douty

    Dearest Lana, The world needs more of your poetry. It is refreshing like spring blossoms after a soft rain on Gods glorious gift o colors and scents. May your lively beautiful spirt continue to dance and sing for the world to see and hear.

  24. joyce-mary

    What a lovely spirit in tune with nature. May Lana continue to dance and sing, may her life be filled with laughter and love and may Adonai bless her and keep her and make His face to shine on her,

    Thank you, Dr. Eli, for sharing her giftedness and innocence.

  25. R

    “I know how to enjoy this blossoming too, this is my great joy!”
    Dear Lana, I don’t know how old you are, but I’d like you to know that today this was a word spoken right to the heart of a tired 50 year old lady who struggles with illness and had forgotten how to take joy in being the person God created her to be and in the creation He has made. She had grown stressed and worried and harried, her brow too often furrowed as she tried harder to measure up. This line has great truth in it. Thank you and I thank our Lord too, for reminding me that the fruit of God’s Spirit is also joy. We need only rest in His work for us and in us. Thank you.

  26. marinete

    how beautful!Dr. ELI, comgratulations for having such a talent daughter

  27. marinete

    Que lindo , Dr. ELI! parabens, por ter uma filha tão talentosa.

  28. Daniel

    Is amazing for your age, the Eternal bless you !!
    Es increíble para tu edad, que el Eterno te bendiga !!

  29. Fr. Placyd Kon

    Thank you, Eli, for sharing it with us!

  30. Ronel

    “Ï like to blossom with it..” – my favourite line. What delicate thoughts, Lana. Your poem brought such a sweet fragrance!

  31. Angie W

    This is very beautiful! Tov maod!!!

  32. Kat Hobaugh

    Lana, beautiful words come from a beautiful heart. How beautiful your heart is!

  33. Lisa

    Lovely. Keep writing!

  34. Luis R. Santos

    A proud papa speaks! Well done!

  35. McLord

    What a amazing heart your daughter has!
    This poem makes me peace!
    Thank You and your daughter!

  36. Beth Viera

    Beautiful poem, Lana! You write ‘like a flower dancing in the wind”! 😀

    Breezy and fresh
    Evokes thoughts of sunshine & smiles
    True joy and delight you bring to your parents
    Happiness in abundance

    Look close… you inspired me! 😉

    May the LORD’s great favor rest upon you always!

  37. Shiri

    Beautiful 🙂

  38. Barak

    Very nice poem & a very talented girl!

  39. Dr. Eli Lizorkin-Eyzenberg

    Great job, Lana!!!! I am very proud of you! Never stop writing! Aba

    1. Fiona Johnson

      Oh Lana beautiful !!….I’m not Spanish but some of the Spanish words,such as primavera for spring ..bring your poetic leanings out beautifully!!