Dr. Eli’s Daughter Lana (11 Years Old) Publishes Her First Poem

Lana Lizorkin's first poemThis is one of my daughter’s first poems. I love it, I think you may like it too. (In Hebrew this piece is written out in acrostic that spells my daughter first and last name!).

 

 

 

 

 

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I love to laugh
I also like to dance
My favorite season is spring

I like to blossom together with it
I know how to enjoy this blossoming too
This is my great joy

I am like a flower dancing in the wind
I am dancing and dreaming
Lite like a bird, knowing how to make friends happy
Nice and ready to always help.

ליצחוק אני אוהבת
נחמד לי גם לירקוד
העונה האהובה עלי היא אביב

לפרוח ביחד איתה נעים לי
יודעת אני ליהנות מהפריחה
זאת שמחה גדולה בשבילי
ואני כמו פרח רוקד ברוח
רוקדת וחולמת

קלה כמו ציפור
יודעת לשמח חברים
נאמנה ועוזרת תמיד

Me encanta reír
También me gusta bailar
Mi estación preferida es la primavera

Me gusta florecer junto a ella
Sé cómo disfrutar también de este florecimiento
Es mi gran alegría

Soy como una flor bailando en el viento
Estoy bailando y soñando
Liviana como un pájaro, sabiendo cómo hacer feliz a los amigos
Agradable y dispuesta a ayudar siempre.

© Lana Lizorkin (2013). All rights reserved.

 

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  1. Ronel

    “Ï like to blossom with it..” – my favourite line. What delicate thoughts, Lana. Your poem brought such a sweet fragrance!

  2. Angie W

    This is very beautiful! Tov maod!!!

  3. Kat Hobaugh

    Lana, beautiful words come from a beautiful heart. How beautiful your heart is!

  4. Lisa

    Lovely. Keep writing!

  5. Luis R. Santos

    A proud papa speaks! Well done!

  6. McLord

    What a amazing heart your daughter has!
    This poem makes me peace!
    Thank You and your daughter!

  7. Beth Viera

    Beautiful poem, Lana! You write ‘like a flower dancing in the wind”! 😀

    Breezy and fresh
    Evokes thoughts of sunshine & smiles
    True joy and delight you bring to your parents
    Happiness in abundance

    Look close… you inspired me! 😉

    May the LORD’s great favor rest upon you always!

  8. Shiri

    Beautiful 🙂

  9. Barak

    Very nice poem & a very talented girl!

  10. Dr. Eli Lizorkin-Eyzenberg

    Great job, Lana!!!! I am very proud of you! Never stop writing! Aba

    1. Fiona Johnson

      Oh Lana beautiful !!….I’m not Spanish but some of the Spanish words,such as primavera for spring ..bring your poetic leanings out beautifully!!